Poetry of the Soul

Poetry is thoughts that breathe, and words that burn. ~Thomas Gray

The 3rd of July July 7, 2010

Filed under: poetry — laurenmichelleotheim @ 11:05 pm

click
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click
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click click click
whoosh
sizzzzzzzzzzzzzzle
pitterpatterpitterpatterpitterpatter
ah
BANG!
whizz pOp BANG! shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhzzzzzzzzzzzz pop BANG!
WhEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEw
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
BANG!
muffle giggle
shhh!
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pitterpatterpitterpatterpitterpatter
click
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click click click

(c) Lauren Otheim – 2010
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8 Responses to “The 3rd of July”

  1. Jingle Says:
    July 7, 2010 at 11:45 pm

    cute, not too late,
    please go ahead and comment for 18 poets NEW 2 u,

    I will place your link in Rally 24.

    Reply
  2. Jingle Says:
    July 8, 2010 at 12:26 am

    The Celebrate Poet of June Award Nomination Announcement

    please vote for poets,
    your link is included, thus you have one vote counted,
    if you vote, you earn another vote for yourself,
    you can vote for 1 to 20 poets from the list…
    many thanks.
    😉

    Reply
  3. brian Says:
    July 8, 2010 at 4:41 am

    nicely done…love that you captured all the sounds and told the tale through that…

    Reply
  4. Jingle Says:
    July 11, 2010 at 12:52 pm

    Happy Belated Birthday Plus Get Well Soon Wishes 4 Five Friends

    please help visit 5 people,
    wishing them Happy Belated Birthday or Get Well Soon.
    Thank you in advance!
    cheers!

    Reply
  5. Jingle Says:
    July 14, 2010 at 11:28 am

    Outstanding Poetry Communities To Share

    check out a post about poetry communities,
    have fun exploring…
    Cheers!

    Reply
  6. trisha Says:
    July 25, 2010 at 6:37 am

    seems you came back while i was away. stay 🙂

    Reply

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