All work and no play
sends the poetry away
five words a day
“Hididyoufindeverythingok?”
“Good!” (could equally be substituted for “OhI’msorryIcancallguestservicesandseeifwehaveit!”)
“Wouldyouliketokeepyourcoathangers?”
“Yourtotalis_______”
“Haveagoodday!”
Water
GASP
I NEED water
too many people with too little to say
makes you wonder about consumerism today
why do they shop if they don’t want to pay?
(c) Lauren Otheim – 2010
laurenmichelleotheim
Poetry of the Soul 
very creative words..
enjoyed the playfulness and wit in it.
😉
Cheers!
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this is some fantastic wordplay
nice word play…great to see you back. how is the summer going?
That was awesome. Props to you. cheers
Lol… I see work is giving you some good experience…
your poem is published and thank you.
😉
that sums it up so well:)
Haha…that’s make me laugh!
this is playful and thumbs up worthy!
I smiled all the way through this poem. I especially like that the poet in you is still playful regardless of dealing with customers all day long. This was fun!
You’re really creative!
I love it. It was so original and so true. Lovely
Powerful poem…You wove it together so well…write on:) Hugs x
the deadline to vote for poets is Sunday…
one last chance,
you gain one vote for yourself when you vote 4 others,
simply reminder, ignore if you dislike it.
the squirrel hidden inside us? which just wants to pile. 🙂
Creative! Connecting the words together gave it a stressful feel, along with the bit about water. Hope you are at least having some fun at work!
Love it!
hahaha….that’s fun writing! Great!
This is so cute…………. 🙂
xoxox
Hello, friend, how are you?
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Cheers!
Very clever, I enjoyed this. : ) and chose to nominate you to Thursday Poets Rally week.
🙂 -Roxanne
welcome to poets rally week 34,
it has been a while…
hope all is well.
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whoa, i love your style of writing here. creative as hell!
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Thank you so much! 🙂